i must first say that the lead for this song was taken from coldplay's clocks. i did however play it myself on piano for recording.
hope you like, although im not sure the chords go with the lead?
One more time
Like JonH2O said - "drums", they feal like...of beat and their sound it's kinda strange so try another sound, the rest it just feels like a great ambient song yet you could try varying more the sound in most of your songs not just this and try working more on the drums, the right power and beat on the drums is usually what makes songs good.
@ JonH2O
it's really from an radio song
Coldplay - Clocks
but it's more chilled
Relaxing, yes, very peaceful
Everything goes perfectly, the chords go completely with the lead, keep the great work up!.
thanks very much mate glad you like. I wasn't too sure about the chords myself.
Relaxing,
Reminds me of a song I've heard a billion times on the radio.
The beginning starts out great. Mixed well.
The drums are strange and seem out of place; very choppy. However, they do play well to the music, its just like...the samples you chose or something.
Like I want to relax and chill to the song but those drums kind of wake me up and keep my attention.
=P
cheers for the feedback. yeah i like the beginning. i think the drums are a bit strange myself, might try a remake with ;ess drums.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
jward230 
