Score: 10
"Electric"
date: August 29, 2008
The Energizer Bunny is nothing compared to the raw power in this.
The beginning makes for an excellent chorus, and you've got a few verses/bridges (0:12 to 0:25 and 0:37 to 0:50). If you keep going the way you were, this could be a great stand-alone piece (if you enjoy crazy-speed like I do). The first fifty seconds have enough variety and theme; there is potential for a three or four minute song.
I can actually imagine something of lyrics going into this, but it would take talent to sing with this music.
I can actually imagine this on Mario Paint...
As a boss-battle theme, you certainly nailed the "power-packed" aspect. Real talent is expanding a prime instant into a complete opus.
10/4. For what it is (a theme) it's perfect. But I want a full song to listen to before I give a 5.
August 31, 2008
Author's Response:
oh, i do enjoy crazy speed. you might not be a fan of classical, but one of my other songs called Frenetic is a good example. its in 7/4 at 245 bpm.
and thank you for recognizing that the sheer power of speed metal is far superior to that of some damn bunny with a drum.
