Score: 8
"Hmm"
date: October 16, 2009
Everything is there except for 2 things.
Firstly, At the beginning around 0:03 there's this common melody that runs throughtout the song which is Bb-A-G-D, C-Bb-A-G right? The second part is supposed to be, as heard by the original song and soundtracks and versions, should be C-Bb-A-Bb.
I don't know if that off note was intentional, but it kind of messes the angst in that melogy.
And secondly, I agree with OnyxMyr that the synths are no-no. They are too short at some parts, which the original strings/piano drag through in legato, while the synths give it a staccato-ish feeling. Also, the synths don't really capture the feelings in this song.
However I like the way the background music plays, although the drums should be deeper and have more bass.