The Black Monster


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08/28/2008 | 11:46PM EDT

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Miscellaneous Song | 5.1 MB | 3 min 42 sec

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Part III - The Black Monster :

...After my secret moonlight journey with the Silver Monster. I returned to the shore, yet again. I wanted to see him. I wanted to know what was behind his glowing eyes...behind his silver mask. The evening was warm tonight, and the waves beat the shore relentlessly; restlessly. There was a storm moving towards the city here. You could see it stretching miles. Dull grey clouds beckoned to be poked open. The construction of these clouds where much like the waves below them. Rolling. Relentless. Restless..

That's when i saw it...

Another mighty beast unlike the one i had made friends with some nights ago. His head slipped out from between clouds baring a similar look to the Silver Monster. His eyes where glowing white. The rest of his body was a dark void. A haze of limbs. He spread the clouds apart and slipped out ponderously. As soon as he hit the water, he was at the shore. I have no idea how he managed such a task. As he stood upon the wet sands, i could make out his splash falling effortlessly behind him..

I couldn't tell this ones intentions. I couldn't find any sort of connection with it. He made my heart sink with an unbearable cold. His empty white gaze bore straight through me. It felt as if he was going to snatch my soul from right where i stood. I slowly backed away, my toes digging deep down into sand. His hazy limbs rose and blocked out my sight, i could see nothing but a fuzzy void. I could barely make out the horizon as his tentacle like limbs wavered in front of me. I turned to run and fell, instantly to my face. Most of the impact on the underside of my chin. I scrambled to gain composure. I didn't look back, i couldn't look back. The fear instilled inside me now was far to great. I have never felt anything like this.

I started for a run and fell instantly. I could barely feel this Black Monster's grip. It felt as if shadows had grabbed for me. Before i knew I had a shifted, upside down view of the clouds. Now, here, as i waved my body around unbalanced, the sky was the sea, and the sea was the clouds.

As i scrambled helplessly about, i was turned...and to the Black Monsters illuminated white gaze i was locked. He had no mouth; no nose; hair; ears. Nothing but large bulbs staring through me. I couldn't scream. I couldn't fight back. I swayed over the clouds helplessly...what did this thing want. I twisted more and caught a glimpse of the city, its halo of light far into the sky, then was back at his eyes again.

...I had a feeling he wasn't staring at me any longer, he was staring through me...to the city.

It began to rain.

( I had a lot of fun doing this one. Its a fairly dark piece, with a hint of classiness. which was a nice change for me. I've been making fairly dark sounds lately...cant quite place why. Odd moods; thoughts.. The breaks go nuts after the jazzy storm swell. This goes hand in hand with "The Silver Monster" and "Moonlight Walking Through Misty Air". )

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Average Score: 9.9 / 10

Score: 10
AddictedToAmbient

"Amazing."

date: March 24, 2009

I have never heard something so beautiful and unique.
I LOVE this song!

March 25, 2009

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Thank you : )

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Score: 9
ColonelNutsack

"You my friend."

date: December 31, 2008

You have immense talent.
You are extremely good at taking an elegant piece such as a piano or some soothing jazz, and put it together with dark and disturbing IDM breaks and yet it works perfectly and almost puts the listener into a trance.

I shall keep a close eye on your music from now on.

January 18, 2009

Author's Response:

Thank man. I really appreciate them words. I'm glad you like my tunes. I like to think of people trancing out to my sounds. : D

I look forward to you listening to other tracks!

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Score: 10
Nurren

"I lurve this :3"

by: Nurren
date: October 11, 2008

I do. It had a jazzy feel to it and great glitchy beats. ;O

October 11, 2008

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Thanks man : D

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Score: 10
darkclp

"love this mix"

date: October 3, 2008

please, for all your fans make more darkcalm/dnb mixes like these its perfect for the fifth story and more

October 4, 2008

Author's Response:

Heh heh - This is probably one of my top favorites so far - you know, I've been working with darker and some more melancholy melodies lately - It's been my mood these days? Heh. Hopefully more to come : P

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Score: 10
bama4678

"wow"

date: September 30, 2008

amazing i like the unique beat to it im gonna listen to silver monster next

October 1, 2008

Author's Response:

Haha, awesome man, thanks for the reviews!

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