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Aug 27, 2008 | 2:38 AM EDT
File Info
1.4 MB
1 min 16 sec
2.90 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 2.90 / 5 stars
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Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern

Author Comments

Hey guys!

I've made my first attempt now at a legitimate hip hop song. It's longer than my previous songs but shorter than what I'd consider a "2 minute standard".

At times I really wasn't sure what to do with the kick and the snare, so I added in a clap sometimes to give it a more modern tech"ish" feel to it.

Enjoy! Vote, review, etc, thanks!



Rated 4 / 5 stars

make me a hot dog

I like the high pitched drum, like a vib or something. great fat synth btw.

photray94 responds:

okay maybe i will make you a hot dog :D


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Great Foundation!

This sounds more like the bass to anothe song. Try adding more of what appears at 00:27. I really did like it, it just needs some depth.

photray94 responds:

Thanks for the review I appreciate it much :]]
Yeah, I kind of made it in about an hour and with the demo of FL Studio I can't save... so as soon as i have like... $300... I'll be able to take the time to add depth.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Not Bad

this wasent that bad but improve on this and use this as a building block and i think it will get better in time

photray94 responds:

I'm just glad people even think its "okay". I'm bad enough using FL Studio so these high scores are really appreciated. thanks for the tip :]


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Cool. Why does this have such a low score?

I like it. It has a nice, steady beat to it. Keep up the good work! The only part I don't like is the middle, when it sounds like a man giving birth to a cow.

PS: I found this through the audio advertisements thread!

photray94 responds:

Thanks I'm glad you like it :]
Yeah I wanted to give the song an orchestral feel with some stringed instruments but it didn't turn out so well....