Not too bad.

A nice little upbeat submission. It gets a little repetitive at first, but you changed it up by cutting out one of the noises around 26 seconds. The only problem with it was that it seemed to end abruptly right there. Making that transition a little bit smoother with something like a fade out might help a little.

The song itself is kind of short and really doesn't loop to well. It has a distinct ending and there is a nice pause between the start/finish time. If you want it to be a loop perhaps make it a little bit of a smoother transition from the beginning to end and cut down on the time in between.

You had a couple of interesting pieces of noise and beats in this, but it really wasn't anything too interesting or original. There is almost a video game type feeling with parts of the song.

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interesting

this is a nice techno its very interesting i like the sound you have for this, its got that calm energetic feel to it. still needs some work though i guess.... im not really a musician so i cant give you any real pointers..... DX

wts up man!!!!!

i like yours songs i vote five in all.
hey what program did u use to do the songs?
answer me plz.

Great work

Yeah, it was a bit short. But mostly a good piece of music. The only weird sounding part was the lead, because it didn't fit into the chord progression. You should try to redo the lead to something that sounds a little softer and fits the chords. And make it longer. Then you'll have a hit. :]

A bit short...

It's a tad short, and the lead seems a bit... odd, to say the least. Not that it's a bad thing, though. Also it doesn't seem to be much of a loop, as it does have a very distinct intro/outro. Altogether pretty good though.