Score: 9
"my story."
date: October 5, 2009
Heres my story,
I walk in, as I realize its a result of my foolishness, I turn on the camera, but the battery shortens out. I had full battery when I was going in. I went upstairs, there was blood smeared everywhere it was horrible. I go to look for something useful, no luck, you turn back to leave. Only to find the door boarded shut with blood all over I hear a sound and I'm compelled to walk toward it there are picture frames on the wall, with no pictures in them, odd. This makes me know how brave i am, none of my friends wanted to come with me, you think as you walk closer and closer to the sound. There are bodies and blood all over, you forget about it, the sound gets louder, The lights go out, you see a face, white as a ghost, your on the verge of fainting from the sights you've seen, its torture! I scream as I drop to my knees, I start to prey to god that I'll survive. With no light to see, you walk, you try the camera again. Full battery! I shouted! You start filming with night vision on, the sound gets closer. Almost sounding inhuman now, you get scared, you are now in a very narrow hallway right now. Even more blood and bodies here, you find a mirror, you look in, you don't see yourself, but you see the little boy and fall to the floor, you pass out of fear. You wake up the next morning, there is no blood or bodies and the door is unlocked. Perhaps it's your imagination, or that happened. What do you think? leave a response and tell me!
October 5, 2009
Author's Response:
Great! I liked it. :)
Thanks for the review!