Cyrptic Temple


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08/25/2008 | 02:33AM EDT

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...you stumble upon an old abandoned temple (for a good reason!). This temple is filled with pictures of people who have past on, and tombs. Then things just seem to go downhill from there. Darkness... the pain you feel when you enter this place, but you cannot escape.
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Average Score: 9.8 / 10

Score: 9
lolman44

"my story."

date: October 5, 2009

Heres my story,

I walk in, as I realize its a result of my foolishness, I turn on the camera, but the battery shortens out. I had full battery when I was going in. I went upstairs, there was blood smeared everywhere it was horrible. I go to look for something useful, no luck, you turn back to leave. Only to find the door boarded shut with blood all over I hear a sound and I'm compelled to walk toward it there are picture frames on the wall, with no pictures in them, odd. This makes me know how brave i am, none of my friends wanted to come with me, you think as you walk closer and closer to the sound. There are bodies and blood all over, you forget about it, the sound gets louder, The lights go out, you see a face, white as a ghost, your on the verge of fainting from the sights you've seen, its torture! I scream as I drop to my knees, I start to prey to god that I'll survive. With no light to see, you walk, you try the camera again. Full battery! I shouted! You start filming with night vision on, the sound gets closer. Almost sounding inhuman now, you get scared, you are now in a very narrow hallway right now. Even more blood and bodies here, you find a mirror, you look in, you don't see yourself, but you see the little boy and fall to the floor, you pass out of fear. You wake up the next morning, there is no blood or bodies and the door is unlocked. Perhaps it's your imagination, or that happened. What do you think? leave a response and tell me!

October 5, 2009

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Great! I liked it. :)

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Score: 10
PIEMANwantsaMUNKEY

"Sweet. Heres your story."

date: September 29, 2009

I got a story too.
As i entered a mansion i saw dismembered corpses everywhere. I got a huge chill knowing that, that scene would be stuck in my head. As i checked more places. Only to hear a strange sound. It was a little girl singing a weird song. I felt fierce but then something that made me want to leave the place happened. I entered a room with 666 scratched into all the walls and roofs and floors and tons of evil possessed pictures in it. It looked like a sad soulless little boy was moving towards me. I thought it was my mind thus giving a little hope that i havent gone crazy. I was hoping that this was a nightmare so i wouldnt have to experience this that long. But i was wrong. As i just wanted to go home i took my stuff and ran like heck to the main room only to see that the doors were gone. I felt like this was hell but i wanted to have faith of getting out of this nightmare alive. I managed to find a clock. It apparently was 4:26 am. I checked my watch and it wasnt there anymore. I remember it being 3:38 when i entered. Then i heard a sound that gave me a chill. I heard a yell of someguy being brutaly tortured, or thats what it sounded like. I saw a shadow upstairs and i followed as my stupididity made me. When i entered the room i saw a corpse whom mouth stitched shut, elbows razored and eyes gouged out. And yet, no weapons to end this living heck. I checked everywhere to find supplies or weapons. I cheered as i saw a window. I barely could see it through all the darkness. I walked toward it. I saw a man who had been peeled all around for a mili second yelling "TURN BACK!" he dissapeared and so did the window. I moaned wondering what did i do to desserver this nightmare. And no result. So i searched more and more for supplies. Nothing. Then suddenly a pitch black hallway came into my sight. I heard a bunch of undead souning screeches in it. So i didnt feel safe and brave enough to go in. I turned around to only see a dead looking doll that had been tortured. It was moving slowely towards me from what it seemed. Dolls were the least of my fears so i went and kicked it straight
in the head. I knocked it off and blood was splatting everywhere. I Was weirded out because dolls are plastic. As i got the courage to go into the hallway i ran. I was bloody mad and i wanted to escape. And i wasnt going to let a hallway of what sounded like the undead get in my way. It couldve been another illusion anyway. So i got my fist out ready to rip some heads off with all my strength. Nothing was there. I sighed in relief. I checked more rooms. A bathroom of a kid whom drowned in the bathtub. I checked the mirror only to see a dead tortured version of me in it. I checked the cabinets for weapons or anything and nothing.
As i grown tired, mad, and weary. I decided that i might as well stop looking and
Think. As the random laughs and the illusions tried to block my thinking it didnt.
I finally decided that i could hold my breath to kill myself. I got an item to squeeze. And it worked. So as i lay dead in the bathroom floor i started to see myself rot. And i woke up. I hope you enjoyed :D. I spent a while making this.

September 30, 2009

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Nice. I like reading in-depth reviews.

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Score: 10
killerman170

"Again Amazing"

date: September 23, 2009

You know littleluckylink put this on his latest flash day of the dead

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Score: 10
Littleluckylink

"Hey why not eh?"

date: July 13, 2009

Fantastic track, so, I figured hey, might as well..

As I entered this strange place, an unbearable drift of ice-cold wind pulls the door shut right behind me. I continue into the main chamber of this temple. Everything is covered in dust, spider webs on almost everything, abandoned for centuries.. I continue on as I begin to get a pounding headache. My vision begins to blur and split. I stagger into a hallway where I come face to face with a large painting of a man. The man's face had a sinister, evil look. His eyes were hypnotizing me. I could not pull myself away. Suddenly, I hear the faint sound of a woman humming. The humming grew louder and louder, as if it were coming closer. The source seemed to be right by my ear. I freed myself from the painting's grasp to investigate. The humming stopped.
I knew from then on I needed to get out of there. I rushed back to the main lobby, but things looked.. Different.. Rearranged. There was no exit, just hallways. In a panic, I chose one of the hallways. Little did I know, I had just entered seemingly endless catacombs. With every turn the light grew dimmer and dimmer. I finally decided to turn back, but upon turning around, I noticed a wall with the same painting on it. I turned back around, yet another wall with the painting.
I was suddenly trapped. All entrances blocked, nothing to do but look at the paintings. I collapsed, the evil spirit overpowering my own body. With the very last surge of strength I had, I tore through one of the paintings. This revealed a chain link fence that seemed to go straight to hell. I looked down to see magma. I then heard grunts of anger from a man. I turned back around to see that the painting had turned into a painting of a skeleton. At that moment, I collapsed to the ground and died slowly, with haunting images of hell.

And then I saved this song and imported it into a fla-....

July 13, 2009

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Great story! I love reading these. :)

Someone should make this into a flash.

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Score: 10
sniperleader1337

"koo."

date: March 6, 2009

my story 'll take place with some guy that's going to die anyways.

the dark hallways filled with the echo of colonel Rim's feet pounding on the ground. running blindly through the damp and forgotten hallways of a dark temple seeking to escape from his unknown chasers. he could feel his heart pounding as he ran around corner around corner only to get himself lost further into the endless maze of the temple. Rim was a 23 year old Colonel in the U.S. army, or what was left of it after the apocolyptic war back in the year 4078. he had been in the army for four years, and had never even been in a life threatening situation, having always commanded from a safe area. this was a new experience for him.
He was the only survivor of a science team sent into that old temple in the middle of nowhere to collect some samples. his team was told there was nothing to worry, and that there was nothing in the temple. upon entering the temple, his team managed to get into a room full of dead bodies and just assumed they were from burials happening years ago.
As Rim turned another corner he ran straight into something he mistook for the wall. just as he was about to back up and try a different direction, arms closed around his shaking body. breaking free of the grip, the scared colonel fired his assault rifle in randome directions, hoping to catch his unseen assailant.
As the rifle fire lit up the hallway, Rim could just barely make out the form of his attacker. scared way more than he had been in his entire life, he continued to run blindly through the corridors.
any hope of escaping left him when he ran headlong into a wall. pulling himself up, he realized he had run straight into a corner. he could hear his chasers closing in on him. as he slid a fresh clip into his assault rifle, he did something he had never done before. Colonel Rim prayed.

if you like it pm me and let me know.

March 24, 2009

Author's Response:

Oh! How did I miss this?!

Very great story! Thanks alot for the review!

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