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** Work in Progress **

People have been asking me to upload something new.. and I've been really busy. So i figure now that we have the ability to edit our submissions, I will upload this as a work in progress to give you guys a taste of things to come. This is not some slapped together piece though, I've put a fair bit of work in it and it's in the clean up stages at this point. This is intended as a sequel of sorts to Betrayal of Fate. (yeah my crappy drums are back but my intention was always for you to be listening to the melodies predominantly)

I'd like to take this opportunity to get feedback from you guys. Please let me know what you like, what you don't like, what you'd like to hear, etc... and if I like the way you think, I'll incorporate your ideas into this, and other songs.

I'd like to thank everyone who has reviewed my stuff and especially those of you who have made videos with my stuff on Newgrounds and Youtube etc, and those of you who have taken the time to message me with your words of support and encouragement. The only reason I do this at all is because of you guys. As cheesy as that sounds, it's true.

I hope you guys like this crazy song and thank you all for listening.

- Gouki

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Average Score: 9.6 / 10

Score: 10

"amazing"

by: Bman130074

date: November 28, 2009

hard to believe it isnt finished yet

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Score: 10

"Gouki............... For... the... win"

by: SpiritoftheWolf

date: November 28, 2009

My mind is blown.... this is deserving of a 10/10, and it's not even completed yet. Maybe my resolve to be a good music critic has been worn down a bit, but I think that I would give this one a high ranking anyways...

It has good rhythm and a steady beat. Not to mention it appeals to the senses. It even keeps a good electronic feel throughout most of the song. I ESPECIALLY like the addition of the chimes. It adds body to places that would otherwise seem thin or empty. Try to add a little more movement in them though. Hitting the same note will only go so far. Also, you have a good placement of the chimes throughout. Not to much, but maybe could have a little more of them, at your discretion, of course.

I also like the dark feel it maintains. An excellent contrast to the higher notes.

Also, keep on using this drum set. It may be crappy, but it sounds good in this song. Maybe a -little- more bass and snare, but just a little.

Anyways, like I said, 10/10 coming right up. I look forward to hearing the completed version of this song.

~Spirit