Not bad at all.
I like the kick you used. The background chords that come in at 0:40 sound a little off-key though. The lead synth sounded really cool too. I'd like to hear the rest some day.
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Hey guys, I've been working on this song for a while, but I need some feedback. Its far from being finished, but I'd like to hear what I can do to improve it, and what direction I should take it in, any comments are welcome!
Rawmin responds:
Hehe, thanks and, today is that day!
I'm not really familiar with this style of music..
...but it would probably work a little better with a shorter intro - just lopping off the first two repetitions would do it.
I know that I thought it was just going to repeat that first bit over and over, so was about to hit stop and move on to something else.
It's tough for me to say much more than that. :D
Rawmin responds:
Thanks for the review, and keep in mind that this isnt the intro, because this is just a section of a track that Im working on. Its nowhere near being done
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