off-pitch O.o

eeeeeeegh.....You should seriously go back and fix the vocals and strings a bit, they're off-pitch enough where they throw off the feeling of the song.
Good drumline on this btw, doesn't sound loopish like alot of your other stuff :P
-TheComet

PS:use the slicer on that vocal and add in some distortion, you can have alot of fun with it :)