Score: 7
"Not bad"
date: August 16, 2008
Lol, who so short? :(. Okay, let's get to it.
First off, your melody is good but, it doesn't grab my attention. It's hardly something that people will be humming and it won't be something that will make someone listen to the song more than once. If I were you, I'd work on making that melody alot more epic and memorable so when someone hears it, all they can say is "Wow". The glistle saw in the background is out of time to me and screws up the whole song to me. Please, get rid of it.
I like your bass but there are parts where it just desn't work for me. Like 0:16. It just sounds jumbled. I'd turn it downaswell and up the low bass freq'. From what I'm hearing in my head, it would sound alot better.
As for the drums. The kick isn't bad. Nice and hard. Clap needs to be louder and the hihat needs EQing' aswell as treble reduction. The snare at the start would sound mad with a little pitch automation just on the last bar aswell. You crashes have a bit too much treble aswell.
I like the composition but there are parts where the song doesn't have enough power. For instance, the break into the verse at 0:15. It's not powerful enough to match the anticipation that the build up gave and it really lets the listener down.
Well, that's it for me. Hopefully this will help the final product and I wish you the best of luck for it.
October 20, 2008
Author's Response:
Well Liquid not every song can be a hit! this was going to be a sub song like a remixer of the move it move song, lawl. but it still jumps
