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Aug 15, 2008 | 8:41 PM EDT
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6.2 MB
3 min 54 sec
Score
4.03 / 5.00

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Rated 4.03 / 5 stars
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Genres:
Electronic - Trance
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Author Comments

So, here's my song, codenamed 'Duality'. Keep in mind it's a work in progress

I originally thought of the melody back when I was doing my song Diagram (back in February), but the song strayed away from the style that could use the melody, so it just got stuck in the project file, and forgotten.

I recently thought of some lyrics that fit exactly with the melody, so I picked it up real quick while I still had inspiration and got to work on this!

I'm quite excited, cause it's my first song with my own vocals and lyrics. Even though the style is quite generic, I hope that I can spice it up a bit with some creativity.

Also, my friend Firewave is working on a remix, alongside me still creating the original track! Which is quite fun. His remix sounded so crazy and original. We think it sounds like some weird action movie soundtrack.

LYRICS:

One look;
To fixate forever
To relinquish never
To freeze me in time

But still, the world keeps on turning
My hear keeps on yearning
For embrace sublime

(Chorus)
I'm stuck in a paradox
Set me free / Entangle me once again
True love / Evil arch enemy
Get the best / Get the worst of me

Well, those are the lyrics so far. Obviously, I'll have more verses (maybe 2/3, I need to replace how they repeat the same one so far), maybe an altered chorus too.

I'll try to record better vocals too, I'm not entirely happy with these so far- they were kind of rushed, and I wanted to get on with the song anyway.

Just posted it to see what you guys think so far! :D

Reviews


cycerincycerin

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I liked it.

I really liked the song itself, especially the extremely retro acid riff that kept filtering in and out. The melody and beat too. Quite well put together. But I didn't care much for the vocals. Your singing isn't technically very strong. If you want to start doing vocals, you should exercise your voice more. The way you used it in the song is fine, though.



Musical-PantsMusical-Pants

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Woah...

I like it a lot!
Very very professional in the mixing of sounds, though the drums before the lyrics are my favorite.
The vocals need some work however. The echo is fine for the intro verses, but it probably should be dropped once you hit the chorus.
Also, the singing seems a little weak. I'm not saying it's bad, it just lacks a certain punch.
The lyrics are fine, but there is too much of a gap between the veses and chorus.
If you were ok with the idea, i'd like to collaborate on the completion of the vocals. I could sing them, write some verses, or do nothing at all, your choice.
I know it's only a demo, but you did a very good job, I look forward to the completion!

-Pants


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Kaburorne responds:

Thanks for the VERY helpful comment! I'll take all of your suggestions into consideration. Most likely, I'll shuffle the structure around a bit too. Now you mention it, the gap does seem too big ;)
And thanks for the offer on the vocals! I'm not too keen on my voice anyway lol
If you could send me a recording of your version, maybe? And I'll see how it fits into the mix. Again, thanks for offering.


AfrojonezAfrojonez

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Woah

I really like this, maybe it's because of the vocals but its really relaxing and I dont know. But its pretty good. You should definatly finish this. I also see that you did a Nyan Nyan remix too :P. Well take care.


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Kaburorne responds:

Thanks for the comment :)
Yeah, Nyan Nyan remix. I'm not too proud of that one :P It's a shame that has got so much attention on YouTube, and no-one checks out my other stuff :(