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This might actually be okay. For the first time, people on IM actually liked something...

200 BPM. Needs a bit more work done. I NEED to find better drums. I kind of thought it sounded like rubbing the members of Freezepop on a glass door when I was done, and someone else thought it was like Venetian Snares (That's what I was originally going for).

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Average Score: 7.0 / 10

Score: 7

"Allow me to rephrase what others said. :P"

by: DeepEmbrace

date: September 19, 2008

While the drums are abundant, they don't really stand out. Also, work on either some glitchy effects or some more luxuriant melodies. I know that sounds like a weak criticism, but there are a variety of resources online about music theory, including how melodies work. Keep at it, though, csd. CHAAAAAWKLIT RAYYYYNE!

September 20, 2008

Author's Response:

Three 7s! I must be lucky! I WISH I could do glitchy effects and the like, but GB can only do so much... or, I can only do so much with what I've learned. I've been messing around in GB every day... I'll figure something out eventually...

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Score: 7

"Hmm"

by: NitroX72

date: September 18, 2008

Needs a little more going on in the background, plus some variety in the drums. also needs more variety in the melody, because it just seemed a little repetitive, and way too low.