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Aug 11, 2008 | 9:02 PM EDT
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3 MB
3 min 19 sec
3.21 / 5.00

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Rated 3.21 / 5 stars
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727 Plays | 85 Downloads
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Electronic - Dance

Author Comments

So yeah...Just trying to getting back into writing songs. Not spectacular, but I definitely feel myself improving =) Dance? Maybe, not sure. Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated! Ask me about the title if you'd like too.



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


I'm with Johnny on this one. The piano was awesome, as always. I don't know what it was about the beat, but it didnt click with me. Maybe if it was a bit faster or something? It seemed to drag on...I liked it once it got to about 2:00. It got more upbeat and there wasn't quite as much focus on the percussion. All in all, I liked it. Oh, wait. The little cymbal crash was kind of weird. Maybe consider a softer sound, or just end on the piano (or don't change it at all ^_~) Anyways, nice job on this one. In spite of my ranting, I did like this one. Beautiful melody; almost as nice as your Touch the Sky =:D

Valtrix responds:

Haha, thanks for the review! Yeah, I'm definitely making my melodies and transitions more sophisticated. I just need to go out there and get that motivation to keep working. I actually found a sound I really like and I've worked up a pattern, and should hopefully be able to finish an ambient song sometime soonish..I know I'm slow making songs.

I guess I've worked quite a bit with piano, which has helped me with my melodies. I guess I'm still trying to incorporate some other sounds in though. It's hard to do everything =P


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


well the echoing piano was kinda cool but the beat was lame

the only criticsm i can give is to make this the right genre it is not country LOL!!!! but i guess thats a good thing right

Valtrix responds:

Well thanks for the review. I'll have to keep that in mind. The beat was lame as in the samples were bad? Just because I think it fits fairly well otherwise.

Also, changed it. Dance is maybe not right either, but it must have scrolled up or something when I selected =P