Score: 10

"Nice!"

by: Zero123Music

date: November 9, 2008

Reminds of after a war has ended and the person is walking across the battlefield.

Sounds like it could fit in Lost Oddeysey at the beginning.

NIce and calm also - great
Nice work.

Score: 10

"Cant believe you did this!"

by: tylercarothers

date: August 27, 2008

I honestly cant believe where this song took me. its like your music is tied together perfectly between these 3 songs. Denial, then Broken wings, Then One Day remains. I shall writs what i see ;D.

This song taking off exactly where Denial v2 left off. The man enters his town after the attack by the soldiers. Horror overcoming him as he sees the dead villagers sprawled on the ground. men, women and child scattaered about. As the mans blood begins to boil he runs from building to building taking what he needs and stuffing it into his pack. Thoughts racing through his mind. Then at 1:37 hes once again at the top of the hill. And as he turns away from his town he knows what must be done. But how to go about it he knows not. Slowly he approaches travellers on the rode first. See who will hear his tale. As time passes he gains some followers. more and more come to his call to end the tyranny of the king until at 1:58 he feels he is ready. he takes his new found army of warriors to face the king on an open field. The following battle is glorious, as steel clashes against steel both armies numbers dwindle. Until all that is left is the Single man that started it all. And the tyrant king in front of him.

then comes One Day Remains.

well done tamadrum. you are absolutely amazing :D

if its sloppy im sorry its a lil late where im at

Score: 9

"It sounds like background music for a war."

by: TeyaEire

date: August 25, 2008

Or for the end of a war, conversely. When all the King's horses and all the King's men are trudging back home after losing again. (Ah, I love rhyming in a sentence. Makes me feel all... "squee"-ish, inside.)

This is a really beautiful piece. It WAS rather dragged out, though that's my only complaint, because it was very good. =D Nice work. 9/10, 5/5

Score: 10

"Sounds very mystical"

by: jackbliss

date: August 11, 2008

Love it. It sounds very mystical kinda legendary as if a great war is going to take place. Would make a great background music as you said. Overal great job :-)

Score: 8

"Beautiful / redundant"

by: X-TERRORIST-X

date: August 11, 2008

This song was good, but I couldn't listen to it for a second time. It really got dragged out too much.

If you shortened it up a bit, my rating would be much higher. Another thing you could improve on is your variety of instruments. That goes hand in hand with what I said earlier, if you use the same drum beat in the back round the song is going to get a little boring.

With all that said, it's still a good song. It could just be a lot better with some modifications.

Keep it up :)

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