Score: 10
"hey"
date: September 4, 2008
that high pitched noise im hearing (im not really musically inclinded) that starts at about.. :28 is really bugging my ears. maybe its just me who knows.. maybe try lowering the intensity to see if it still works.
other than that i can say this is going to turn into an awesome song if you continue working on it. i can see an awesome progression track in the making. the main melody is fine but add a secondary melody for more variation if you're going all out on this.
bassline is perfect dont change it.
keep it up man, ill be looking for the final version