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Gah! I hate being stuck. >_< I'm thinking of starting this whole song over unless something crops up. Anyway, it isn't much and I haven't cleaned it up, but if any of you had any suggestions, I'd be more than willing to hear them.

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Average Score: 7.7 / 10

Score: 6

"heres what you do"

by: BOBdiedTwIcE

date: August 17, 2008

take out everything before 0:27 and completely get rid of that annoying hitting a garbage can noise in the intro the back beat you have at 0:40 is fine make the whole thing longer and you need to keep one or two general ideas for the whole song your intro sounds like industrial techno while the outro is d'n'b and the middle is good ambienton that not the drop out you have in the middle could make the song a good progressive trance but you don't take it anywhere there feels like there is no climax to the song all in all ok not great but a decent try re work it at least think about my advice

August 18, 2008

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Will do, thanks.

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Score: 9

"Awesome"

by: mrpibbs1

date: August 16, 2008

Hey, thanks for the review, now its my turn to review your music.
I really like it. It sounds very happy. Great job man, keep up the good work!
9/10
5/5

Now to check out your other stuff...