Score: 8
"Ok, well..."
date: August 4, 2008
If you knew the sequencing of the claps was off why'd ya upload it before fixing, silly? :)
Heh, here're some other problems...
Don't start the song with a crash unless you're leading with hard-pounding drums right away. since it starts off subtle, save the crash till right before the claps you need to fix. (they sound kinda weird too, use a diff sample maybe?)
The open-hat you use is off 1/16th and feels very disconcerting being where it. :P put it one/sixteenth earlier.
Waaayyyy too much resonance on the solo synth that starts at 1:48, blasting my speakers to shreds almost. :p It's fun to play with the frequency but make sure you tone the res properly when you're doing that! :D nice melody for it, just sounds whack with the res/freq.
A very fun tune throughout. I hope these comments help and you don't mind me picking apart your tune :)
August 4, 2008
Author's Response:
I'm fine with ur review. I was really in a rush with the claps, and i didn't put much thought into them. So im changing the clap to more of a Snare type of thing. I should take you're advice with the crash, I should just kill the crash at the beggining and move on. The Hihat you are reffering to is supposed to be off if im thinking about the right tempo you are talking about. I noticed the res on the solo and need to fix that immediately. I may not be able to fix all these for a week because my FL computer is currently unavailible and i'm using my friends for awhile until i get mine ready again. I will listen to your music (If you have any) And vote 5 and review!
Dj-Typhlanar