iight man

heres some constructive criticism from me ta yu iight...
first off, if yu aint get wut im tellin yu, check out my songz and yull c wut i mean...

1-too repetative, dont loop like this, its un original and claims that yu got a short attention span cuz yu cant think of nemore melody

2-the guitar and tha drumz sound like a 2 premade samples that yu put togetha, if thas tru then that shows no creativity.

3-ill check out ya otha beats n continue there...