Score: 10
"Great song but needs more oriental..."
date: April 8, 2009
I honestly like the song but I like to give constructive criticism just to help, so please bear with me for I have the tendency to go on forever sometimes. So I also agree with achatz a beginning like that would be a great improvement, the instruments around 0:40 made it sound like the ninja s were mischievous student ninjas or young ninjas just messing around having a party, ninjas should be more heartless or bad-ass, and the part of the song around 1:23 sounds more like the ninjas hopping from pole to pole rather than destruction or something of that sort, and then when the beat kicks back in again around 2:00 it sounded like a ninja boss was here or some higher entity of ninja performing a jutsu or something if that was the idea then it was ok could use more of a furious beat and oriental instrument so the listener gets more of better image in his/her head, try experimenting with other chinese/japanese instruments after all the main point that achatz made that I totally agree with, considering the fact I love music, "Composing music is like writing a story."
