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Please Come Back (DEMO)

Author

SmackBuddy

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Date Submitted

07/26/2008 | 02:45AM EDT

File Information

Punk Song | 2 MB | 2 min 9 sec

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Current Score

2.54 / 5.00

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4 downloads

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Author Comments

It's another demo
It's about all the relationships i've screwed up.
BUT NOW TO THE UNSERIOUS SIDE
Im a clown!
This took me only 3 days to make this far!!
Bad engrish!

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Average Score: 4.7 / 10

Score: 5
xXsnowbladeXx

"eh,,,"

date: July 26, 2008

The first 17 seconds are good, but after that it just turns into a messy distorted... thing.
I know you put effort inot this - three days is a fair while to work on a song for.
i give you a 5/10 for the work you put inot this and for the first 17 seconds.
5/10
3/5

-xXSnowBladeXx

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Score: 4
Ethalyn

"ok....."

date: July 26, 2008

im no fan of punk, and yes, this pretty much confirmed it, it is so empty and lack any sense of bass, and is all very messy.

-_Beating_-[-_¤_-]-_Source_-

July 26, 2008

Author's Response:

Now i DO like constructive critisism, but saying that you dont like this style of music then rating it low doesn't make sense... what where you doing in the Punk section anyways? And if you just saw it on audio portal then that's different, but please dont vote unless you like this kind of music.
P.S. your signature is monkey suck

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Score: 5
Punkboyben

"It's OK"

date: July 26, 2008

Honestly its not bad until it goes into distortion, thats the part that ruins it. The intro sounds a bit like Smashing Pumpkins which is good but then you added a bit too much crash on the drums and tried to make it too frantic. All in all it sounded a bit messy from that point onward. Next time try to tone it down a little. Other than that it was a good effort, also what program are you using?

All the best,

-Punkboyben

July 26, 2008

Author's Response:

Well I like this kind of report, so im going to only add one crash at the beginning of the measure, then have open hi hat where all the old crashes used to be, and im gonna add more bass like the arse above said
EDIT: Program is called Guitar Pro 5.2, you can the trial at....
idk just google it

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