potential

Nice, simple tune.
Fixes:
-piano(?) echoes oddly/too strongly on the last note of the main phrase in particular

good but

It needs to be stronger. If you don't care what I mean, then don't read the next paragraph. >=)

The intro is the attention grabber (its mine anyway). The drums should be brought out more and trhere should be some crashes. Maybe more stuff. I can think of other things but, its your song lol. Don't take offense because I am only trying to help =(.

But yeah, this song has potential. (that's a complement). Keep it up.