I wasn't really sure where to put this...
I got kind of rushed towards the end, and I don't very much like how the end came out.
Otherwise, I thought it was a good song.
Not a bad start
I like it. I would experiment though with maybe adding another background song, or the drum part. I know, if your like me and using a drum machine, variety is something you cant really do. I actually thought the ending was the best part.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
AceOfBlades 
