Great beginning.

It had a great beginning which is a great plus. The sound was great. The melody was good but the claps brought it down a bit. Overall good song with a great melody.

Gu-rrilla
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Nice Start

The melody was very quiet, but it got the job done. It had kind of a sad, "end of the world" kind of feel to it. Or at least I thought so, as it reminded me of the night of the final day in Majora's Mask. :P The percussion was quite good here, it really was the focal point of the song as there didn't seem to be a dominate rhythm over it.
The end sounded like you just stopped working on it right in the middle of the song! :P I would keep working on this. Add a really distinguishable lead to the song, and maybe a little solo thrown in there, too, and you'll have something pretty good. :)

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Take it further

It's a decent start, but I think that you could add things to it - other sounds from the keyboard would be nice, possibly an electric piano sound, to solidify the melody, rather than the beat and the rhythm that you've got here.

A stronger bass beat would also help, but be careful not to overdo it - that would be so easy to do with a track of this kind of softness.

Also, fix the looping issue, it would be much better then.

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Thats okay

I not heard much new wave ,and this is a nice change.

This track reminded me of being on a beach, the tune is very laid back. The sound is pretty simple ,not much happens. I like the way it got some easy tunes ,with some faster one mixed in. The intro is good i like the sound ,as it good throughout the time.

The only thing is the other sound like clapping ,its annoying. Also it ends suddenly with no reason, to it. the tune can get a little dull.

Overeall a pretty good track.

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\m/

Ok, so this is just a preview and it's quite clear when listening to it that this isn't the final product of your efforts. ;)

The background melody is very nice, but I don't think that those clapping sounds really fit in here. They offer quite a nice beat, but it just doesn't sound right. Maybe you should replace the clapping with some drums.

Also, the track suddendly ends at 1:18 and we are left with 7 seconds of silence. You could have used those 7 seconds to slowly fade out the track. ^^

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