Score: 4
"You can do better."
date: July 12, 2008
(I listen to it as I write)
The beginning is good.
Right when the lead comes in, I found it to be off key. Like it was playing in a completely different key entirely.
No bass or drum like you said there was...
This song is pretty boring, and it ends sorta badly...I would add more stuff to it, like make it change up a bit more, and end it properly.
Keep trying.