Ok so its definitely nowhere near finished yet, but in my opinion its the best attempt I've made at a song yet. Took me 1-2hours and I mainly used vanguard. Please review and tell me how to improve it.
Cheers
D.J.D.
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There really are some good melodies in here. You just have to organize it a little more so it doesn't sound all random. Try to experiment with different types of transitions between each melody. Maybe add a background pad and a bass to make it sound fuller. EQing and mixing might need a little work too since the synths sound a little too loud and it's drowning out the drums. Anyway hope you improve on this but good work so far. :)
-DzGuy
ok cheers for da advice
Let me start by saying...
You have alot of good melodies throughout the song, actually, they are awesome. But the problem is that you're not detailing them enough, and you seem to just through them all together. You gotta let it flow from melody to melody, even layer a few o add highlighted sections. You should just improve on it a bit while its still in development.
Really, just add a descent bass and improve the drums a bit, plus, you gotta use better transitions as well... let me know when you upload another update and i can review it again for you^^
Ta for the review. I have uploaded an update already - check ya pm inbox for details. If you ever want a review just pm me.
D.J.D.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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