This theme was originally something I didn't really feel like submitting due to me being uncertain of the quality. The reason I've submitted it now is to actually try to gain positive and constructive feedback in order to improve. I hope that it'll either live up to the standard I've previously set, surpass it or at least be of some entertainment to you as a listener.
Takes use of the full orchestra, starts off in Minor, ends in Dorian.
nicely done
this is a good song but the styleing is more a remeberence song it reminds me of how many live have been lost to war not that there is war or the feeling of urgencey in war use more drums and bass less strings next time it also has a final fantasy feeling to it
a pretty good war song
but some things seem off like a solid percussive presence such as a cadence or possibly more tuba would be a quick fix, however i would be really happy if u made it less graceful and gave it a little dose of reality because it is a WAR song and WAR is loud . The piece is great don't get me wrong but there is room for improvement and i like it regardless anyways so good job can't wait to hear the next one.
I would have tweaked it a little...
I would have used the brass a little more heavily. A war chant shouldn't be primarily strings.
The snare cadence should have continued throughout the entire song. It could have also been a little more complex than just accented triplets. (Being a percussionist myself, I always think that ANY march should be built around a decent cadence.)
Beautiful.
My heart's having an emotional affair with your music now.
This piece is truly amazing.
Very nice
This song has a very nice flow to it. It almost feels like an intro or trailer music for a war-based strategy game. However, as BlazerX2 mentioned before, when the snare drum starts up, it feels like the song is really starting to build up when it abruptly ends. Maybe build on this song a little more in my opinion.
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