i liked ur melody...

thats custom right?
BUT, other than your melody and chord hits, this song is fairly basic sounding in my books. So for that i can only give u a 9 and a 4.

My suggestions;
>Add a bassline to follow ur melody line, have it compliment the chord hits
>Change up the Kick more often, move away from th 4/4 kick
(i liked how it doubled up at 1:50)
>Add a hi hat that is more audiable
>When your melody doubles pace at 2:10-ish, you could make a nicer solo there (or in other spots where that happens).

And thats what i see at the moment, Pce

_-Mach 2-_