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happy b-day, NAV!

this song was VERY VERY hard to make, i had to use Syntrus, MS Paint, a stapler, AND my Nokia 313G5 to make it JUST right!

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by: Haggard

date: August 10, 2008

Well, this was obviously meant ironic, but I just don't find it too funny.

2 seconds, 4 drum beats... and it doesn't even loop right. Sorry, that's just not my style of humor.

Maybe you shouldn't use MS Paint next time.

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"Just Wrong"

by: Coop83

date: August 9, 2008

Even with the hi-tech additions of Syntrus, MS Paint, a stapler, AND your Nokia 313G5 to the track's conception, you have failed to make it just right. What we have is two beats that even failed to loop.

If you're trying to say happy birthday to a friend of yours, please do so by making a news post, for example. This is not the constructive way to be have on Newgrounds and I'd have thought that you would have been aware of this right now.

If this is not the submission that you intended, please feel free to submit it again and i will render a suitable review.

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Score: 2

"Too Short"

by: Little-Rena

date: August 5, 2008

This is really too short to say much about it I mean there isn't much too it, all you have is what, two drum beats or something, I mean sure it loops well but if it didn't I would be quite shocked. It's not even got much to it to call a birthday tune either, infact it doesn't really have anything to it, I suppose a good thing about it is it isn't annoying, lol.

You could really make something longer, with more to it and make it worth the listerners time in that sense, I know it's not a waste of your own time to make this, doubt it took too long. Spend more time on your work, make it longer and everything.

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Score: 4

"Shortest tune"

by: phantomlassuk

date: August 4, 2008

Well this is extremely short only 2 seconds, difficult to review but i will try.

Well despite the fact is so short the loop is quite good its only a rather basic, sound. Not sure what its sound like drums, and other bases. The fact its a birthday tune is sweet. The loop fits in alot for the very brief time ,its not a bad effort.

The problem is its got no sound apa,rt from the repetitve loop. Which goes on its far to short, how can you manage to fit in any music in just 2 seconds?. The sounds really does get annoying is like a banging. sound that loops badly. If you added sound made it longer, then it would have been better. This seems like you dont not really put much effort in sorry.

Overeal spend more time on this.

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