Score: 10
"very ambient..."
date: July 1, 2008
Kinda like Coldplay in a sense.
You kinda lost it at around 20 seconds.
But it gets productively better as it plays.
It could afford to be a little in sync,
But suddenly it speeds up around 55 seconds and then slows down.
Keep good tempo...but that's simply with practice
Keep at it! You're only getting better even when it doesn't seem like it.
July 1, 2008
Author's Response:
thanks for another very helpful review! again, this is unfinished. it will get better when it's finished.