Trance/RnB/Hiphop/? Remakix(?)of 'A Prayer to a Road that leads' from "Chrono Trigger."

Decided I didn't like my girlfriend reading my stuff so i erased it!

P.S- I hate remixing songs as a matter of fact this is my first remix....i like them to be all mine so i rationalized by picking 3 chords in the game hardly qualifies as a remix...more like a remake...any advice you can give will be appreciated as this song is still in development...so it will probably get modified with suggestions! Thanks in advance & review!

~Encore.
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Update- Took DjConnect Advice And changed the guitar at the end to a piano...it's getting better. Nice idea man! ^^^Thank him for the piano at the end.

Update- Thank DesertedSpark down below for the Guitar in there aswell. He was joking when he said put it in...but i took it literally~