Score: 1
"This was..."
date: September 19, 2008
Kind of a waste of FL studio. Honetly, all you have here is a single melody and nothing else to compliment it. I know two year olds that could plunk this out on a keyboard better than this.
All I'm saying is reach out a little. I listenned to some other music on your page, and you can do better than this. I think you should remake it, and try using the metronome feature in FL to keep good time. Also, listen carefully to the original tune, you were way off on a key there.
Anyway, not trying to be too harsh... just try putting some effort into it next time.