Score: 4
"lacking in 'punch'."
date: August 11, 2008
The opening 'bubbly' sound is a bit odd for this kinda music, but I like it.
I'm not too keen on the screechy sound we hear at 27s and throughout until 47s. The whole 27s-42s bit sounds a bit too sparse and repetitive to be just an instrumental. I'd suggest changing it up a bit more.
I'm not keen on the transition into those parts - I like the drumrolls, but when you change into those repetitive melodies, it sounds kinda jarring to me.
The guitars and drums keep a tight beat.
Some part were fun - I liked the ending and there's a fair bit of energy.
At the moment though, it feels a bit thrown together and doesn't have the punch it could have.
September 19, 2008
Author's Response:
odd is good! But well well, thanks for your time.