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Stuck on a Name

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Please leave a review, so I know what to improve on.

Thank you,
Jxl180

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I hear an FL user.

I recognize that loop in the beggining and the Eurogate. the drums in the beggining were kool. Then the drums changed a bit to give more variety. The song flowed very nicely and the transisitons were smooth. Good work.

Suggetsions: something is missing from this song. I think you could have introduced a main lead of some sort rather than just use a loop. A melody would have been real nice.

=Review Request Club=

jxl180 responds:

I guess you use fl too. I wish i could make melodies.

Alright!

This is a cool track, some parts are better than others though. I like the druyms at the beginning. They have a nice rythm to it. I like when the cymbals hit too.

The only bad thing is that its kinda repetative, got a little boring after a while listening to it. It needs more for it to keep me interested. Add some instrumental and beat variations to it and it'll be great!!

[RRC]

jxl180 responds:

Thank you, sort of like a drum solo, you mean?

P.S. These reviews are starting to get repetitive. :P.

P.S.S. Just kidding about the above, keep the reviews coming!

Call it 'Wavelength'

That was the first think that jumped into my head when I listeded to this song. That and the intro that you played sounded a little like the start of Common People, by Pulp.

Not too sure about the protracted siliences and just drum beat in the middle. Songs aren't made to have pauses that long in them, so maybe tighten it up a bit and add something more creative with the drums for that part.

[Review Request Club]

jxl180 responds:

Never heard of that song, I'll be sure to check it out. I just get scared about making shorter songs. I don't want people saying, "You should have made it longer!" But i guess short and great is better than long and drawn out.

It's Okay

Well mainly it just sounds a little too repetitive to me, I mean it works and everything sounds okay, so there is nothing wrong with that, I just think it needs more change through the thing. You have parts where it goes much quieter and a few changes, but you should change the whole thing in bits so by the end it doesn't sound as much like the start, unless you want it to loop.

Overall though, there is nothing that stands out as sounding too bad and the ending fade does sound good, as does the opening build up. The only problem I have with it is the fact that it sounds to repetitive, sorry :(

3/5

<3

= Review Request Club =

jxl180 responds:

Thank you, and don't be sorry for telling the truth. Otherwise there would be no way to improve.

\m/

It's a bit too repititive for me, but the drum track sure is very nice. The beat is quite interesting. But I think the drums need more "power" and more bass. Right now they sound much too weak.

Also, this track could need some kind of hookline, or a main theme other than the drums. It's a bit plain right now.

But it also has a great potential. I think you can build upon what you already have here and create something big out of it. ;)

{ Review Request Club }

jxl180 responds:

Thank you for your review. After I made this song, I searched the net for a heavier drum sound with more bass and found one. My new drum loop that I submitted was an experimental beat I made, testing out the new kick.

Credits & Info

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Listens
1,457
Downloads
88
Votes
13
Score
3.69 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 24, 2008
11:58 PM EDT
Genre
Trance
File Info
Song
3.2 MB
3 min 31 sec

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