Score: 8

"cool tunes:)"

by: Ethalyn

date: July 9, 2008

Love the tune, but i guess you made this one before you learned about mastering, i just learned it and it really does wonders! but as said the tunes are very cool, but maybe dl some new vst plugins for your drums? i really like your music:) keep it up^^

-Beating-Source-

Score: 6

"Good construction, not so great mastering."

by: DjGamah

date: June 23, 2008

You did very well with the melodies and sound choice here, good job with the way you've made the song progress.

My only problem is that everyting is REALLY FUCKING LOUD D:

Some of the cooler parts get drowned out at some points, and at others are too over-blaring to enjoy sometimes.

Great song otherwise though! 4/5 6/10

Score: 9

"Cool"

by: TeenParadox

date: June 20, 2008

Me liked. Although there was some melodic friction as Viros has already said, I think you just need more variation on it. For example kicking up the melody another octave at 00:40 and then bringing it down to normal once the bells/mallet percussion part ends (bells are not necessarily part of the melody).

Score: 7

"Firm, soft and bumpy, like a good pair of b- um..."

by: Madricious

date: June 19, 2008

For being new to writing, you've certainly done well with the Author Comment!

Oh, you meant SONG writing. Well then!

Personally, it feels a little too "bumpy" in places (1:44, for instance), but otherwise, it is pretty good for being a newer piece.

I would like to hear the background a little bit more. I didn't even notice it until the third or fourth loop (except at the soft spot at 0:53 and 1:44, where I thought it was exclusive to those sections, and at the end).

Quite enjoyable, though. I definitely look forward to hearing more by you.

Score: 7

"You got talent"

by: Viros

date: June 19, 2008

Yeah, tracks getting overlooked in the audio portal is a pretty common occurrence - 17 votes here, 23 votes here.

Wouldn't be surprised if there are twice the audio tracks than flash submissions, and they (the audio) get half as many views...

Overall this is pretty cool, though i have a few critiques...

The melody is a little high-pitched for me, but that's me, the melody is really good, the notes are fine, just really high to me, i imagine this in a club and my ears would be hurting - but what else would happen at a club anyway?

Some notes on points in the track:

at 00:43 there is some melodic clashing, and again at 1:36 - it kinda works, but it just sounds...off.

i like the bass line and the beat, both very nice and the bass track mixes well with the rest.

Overall, really good track, sowing some immense skill there and understanding of how this whole music thing works.

What sequencer do you use?