Yikes, not awesome
The production is not good. The riff is repetitive. The vocals(probably a production issue)seem like they would be killer if better produced. But, in all honesty, I didn't enjoy this very much. I'll check out some other submissions and see if they are a little better. I'm curious as to what you're using to record. And I'd like to recommend Adobe Audition. Good luck and sorry about the vote
Matt