Good stuff and...

You are both a talented musician and you show willingness to learn! i like that! your like a sponge! a musical sponge! with wings! and a pet mule named sanchez!

I like it

I like it, but i needs to be a speed up around 28sec

it's pretty good

summary: it's okay. i mean it's not the best but good try. =)

your score: u get a 7/10 and a 4/5 nice.....

improvements: there is barely any music in this. i thought that when u keepgoing into the song it sounded like u were going to add more tune. the bass is okay but the treble isn't good. u have to add more sounds and more music to make it grander and then the song would sound better.

nice job. take my advice ok?