Score: 4

">:P"

by: TheBellmaker

date: July 7, 2008

Well, this song had sorta a riff going on. NIce rhythm, too.

Suggestions: I really couldn't find any coherence in this track. Very unorganized. And the tune would flow kool for a bit then all of a sudden a bad chord would kick in an ruin the moment. Try again.

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Score: 3

"An uninteresting experiment"

by: Bezman

date: July 6, 2008

With a 3s pause at the end, it's not a loop. Not enough happens for it to be a song.

The first 7s doesn't seem to have much to do with the remainder of the track. It is full of slightly dud-sounding notes. Could have worked in a different context, but not here.

I think the 8s-16s part would make a decent loop for a fuller song.

It just seems like an experiment - an unfinished WIP. I suggest you keep going and resubmit when it sounds more like a whole song.

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Score: 2

"Em..."

by: Viridis

date: July 6, 2008

This was pretty bad, ive heard far worse but this was terrible. You had loads of instruments all going at once, with no direction on structure to the song. You need to pace it more and think carefully about what instrument or sound your placing where.

Better luck next time.

[RRC]

Score: 3

"Needs Improvement"

by: Bomber1337

date: July 6, 2008

This needs some major Improvement dude. Like not making it blow up my ears but it was a good try.

Score: 2

"Just Rock Off"

by: Coop83

date: July 6, 2008

There were so many things worng with this track that I don't really know where to start. It's difficult for me to be so unhappy with a tune that was only half a minute long, but hey.

There were bad notes in this tune from start to finish. Either you've not tried to edit this tune or you're tone deaf. The volume is too high, as the track experiences the beginnings of static like feedback over the speakers. Turning it down a little would give you a more crisp sounding tune and you need all the help you can get.

Finally, the track needs to stop dead at about 25s. Maybe that way, you could turn it into a loop and give it some greater purpose.

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