>:P

Well, this song had sorta a riff going on. NIce rhythm, too.

Suggestions: I really couldn't find any coherence in this track. Very unorganized. And the tune would flow kool for a bit then all of a sudden a bad chord would kick in an ruin the moment. Try again.

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An uninteresting experiment

With a 3s pause at the end, it's not a loop. Not enough happens for it to be a song.

The first 7s doesn't seem to have much to do with the remainder of the track. It is full of slightly dud-sounding notes. Could have worked in a different context, but not here.

I think the 8s-16s part would make a decent loop for a fuller song.

It just seems like an experiment - an unfinished WIP. I suggest you keep going and resubmit when it sounds more like a whole song.

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Em...

This was pretty bad, ive heard far worse but this was terrible. You had loads of instruments all going at once, with no direction on structure to the song. You need to pace it more and think carefully about what instrument or sound your placing where.

Better luck next time.

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Just Rock Off

There were so many things worng with this track that I don't really know where to start. It's difficult for me to be so unhappy with a tune that was only half a minute long, but hey.

There were bad notes in this tune from start to finish. Either you've not tried to edit this tune or you're tone deaf. The volume is too high, as the track experiences the beginnings of static like feedback over the speakers. Turning it down a little would give you a more crisp sounding tune and you need all the help you can get.

Finally, the track needs to stop dead at about 25s. Maybe that way, you could turn it into a loop and give it some greater purpose.

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Messy

This doesn't really sound to have any direction to it and just doesn't really sound all that great overall. The whole thing sounds out of tune and just thrown together randomly, the large pause at the end is also a waste of time, it doesn't make it loop all that well, just sounds really bad. You could remove the pause and try to make a loop out of this, if you wanted to.

You could really improve on everything here, there isn't really much here that is worth listerning to, the whole thing just sounds like a mess, you have a change early on which doesn't go smoothly and the ending is just too sudden, as well as this being far too short.

1/5

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