Score: 10

"New Second Favorite!"

by: Anture

date: November 2, 2008

This is my new second favorite song in the world. You are truely an epic artist! I admire your work so. I have so many words running through my head about this most excellent track i just don't know where to start on the brilliance of this fine work of art! You truely are amazing, keep up the most brilliant work!

-May be your biggest fan =P

Score: 9

"i like the ryhtm"

by: Sanryd

date: July 13, 2008

I really like the rythm... how ever the hell you spell it.... of the melody. It has like a "jump style" feel to it. I might try my hand at this style sometime soon. Anyways, just some encouragement to keep it up... good song, do more... learn more, share more, teach more.... meh.

Later.

Score: 7

"Good effor"

by: Carf

date: July 7, 2008

altrough its a bit repeditive.

Score: 8

"Not my usual style, but...."

by: CaptainWonderpants

date: June 19, 2008

Not my usual style, I don't usually enjoy heavier songs..

But this was a pretty cool track, solid effort man.

Also, 16 year old Australians are awesome :D

Score: 8

"Well, let's see what I can do for this song."

by: Karco

date: June 14, 2008

As I'm going around and reviewing more songs than usual, I may as well. :D

First off, your mix - it's been a problem apparently since the last version so I'll comment on my thoughts this time. First, your kick isn't that good. It's hard for me to judge because your clap's playing right along with it, but there isn't enough boom to it and too much mids and high mids. I hear that low bass rumble, but there's just not enough of it there. It might be a multiband compressor or something, compressing the low end and leaving the higher end relatively alone (or a normal compressor, with which I've gotten similar results, which I can't figure out myself). Careful with those either way. ;)

As for your bass, it sounds a lot like a sample when it plays different notes - I'd stay far away from sample synths if I were you, they're quite limiting compared to actual VSTis and either a) you're using them raw, which isn't good in terms of originality and effort, or b) you're heavily processing them, which I find very hard to believe because it sounds to me like it came straight out of VEC or VEC2. And anyway, if you're heavily processing your bass, you can put the same effort in creating a good synth, or disguising a preset if you have to. ;)

Melodywork's all good considering the style of the song, though I'd use a more creative bassline than one just using the 1st, 6th, and 7th notes of the scale. The 3rd note of the scale is often just as easy to use (and the 4th to a lesser degree), and one I've found to be a lot less common (and the 4th to a greater degree). If you can use the 2nd or 5th notes of the scale, and WELL, that would be really creative. :D

That's about all I've got for this song, hopefully I've helped. :) I'd rate 7/10, but I want to give an extra point for the effort, so here's an 8 and a 4/5 vote. :D