Score: 7

"Hmm"

by: Coop83

date: August 2, 2008

I'd be giving this more stars if you'd added some more variation to the bass beat - it's quite dull on that token and I'd like to hear if you can offer us something different. A break in the middle of the melody, to allow the bass to take over for a little while would certainly add to the variation of the track and would allow the bass to shine through.

Otherwise, the tune gets a little samey. Maybe tone down the volume of the melody, as it's quite dominant at present.

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Score: 4

"bass gets a bit dull."

by: Bezman

date: August 1, 2008

Overall, this was just straddling an uncomfortable position - it wasn't quite engaging or intricate enough for me to enjoy sitting, listening and wasn't furious or 'passionate' enough to inspire me to get up and dance.

I love the slow synths at the start.

The bass that pops in at :24 and continues on throughout the entire piece is a bit overpowering - specially when it gets to 1:20-2:00. It just sorta made that part seem really repetitive to me and didn't sound passionate enough to be repeated so many times. I'd rather have been able to hear the synths and whatnot you've got on top.

The :30 - :50 part is way cool though. Love the sorta semi-staccato break-beat-y sound.

Ending was cool too.

but maybe either add more fury or more intricacy and a touch more gentleness - with this tune straddling the 2 sides, it currently fails at both imo.

Score: 9

"Wow"

by: Satoris

date: July 30, 2008

Very catchy. I love the synth work. The bass underneath the melody at 01:00 is very daunting. Sorry this isn't the longest review ever, but I can only say I like it in so many ways lol. Keep up the good work!

Score: 7

"\m/"

by: Haggard

date: July 29, 2008

The main melody is very nice and, well, lucid. Sadly, the drum beat is too quiet and can hardly be heard when the main melody is playing.

You should try to increase the volume of the beats to get a much better sound.

Also, some more variations from the melody would be nice. You already added some breaks in here, but it still gets very repititive after a while.

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Score: 8

"Lucid indeed"

by: phantomlassuk

date: July 28, 2008

I like the name of this title is got a dream sound.

I felt the tune is like a dream with the calm start ,then the tune goes crazy. With some fast techno beats.The vibes are very much trance sounding, its fast, and the tune is frantic and keeps you on your toes. The tune did remind me of a dream theme towards the end, it jazzed up. With the best going surreal almost. The finale is amazing. The intro calm s,o its ends and is good mixture.

Not much i did not like really mayb if it was longer.

Overeall lucid piece

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