Score: 6
"Good, but a little disappointing"
date: June 16, 2008
It has a very good rhythm indeed. Very nice composed. I love the simple combination of piano and strings, but I didn't quite like the drums. The drums' beat had a Hip Hop smell all over it, and my nose did not quite like the smell. I would recommend you to replace it with some piano chords. I also noticed the melody's similarities to the very beautiful melody Canon in D by Johann Pachelbel, which dragged the score a little down.
I sort of like your melody anyway, though! Keep up the good work!