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Uploaded
Jun 6, 2008 | 1:34 AM EDT
File Info
Song
5.8 MB
4 min 13 sec
Score
4.08 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 4.08 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
561 Plays | 69 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern
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Author Comments

Experimenting, hopefully getting better at this!
Please comment and Critique.
I want to get better, let me know how.

Reviews


flashmacflashmac

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Not bad

I understand your new to this but this isn't too bad. You got the melodies pretty good. The drums were allright but could've used some work. Try using a normal pattern like this:

Kick: [x][][][x][][][x][][][][x][][][x][][]
Snare: [][][][][x][][][][][][x][][][][][]
Hi Hat: [x][x][x][x][x][x][x][x][x][x][x][x][
x][x][x][x]

(The [] are a note on the redrum and the [x] are where you should put the note)

Just keep practicing diffrent patterns until you find some that sound more hip hopish and that you like.

5/5 - 4.38 / 5.00 (+ 0.045)


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OBIEakaAO responds:

thanks bro, i wll try that, do you use the default instruments or do you have refills? let me know! thanks for the review!


YourTreasonIsSilenceYourTreasonIsSilence

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice

Well, It was pretty good though I felt that there was not enough interesting changes it just sorta stayed with the same thing with little blips here and there through the whole thing. All in all good work, keep it up!


OBIEakaAO responds:

hey thanks! It was made for a rapper/singer, a constant rythm helps keep a good flow! Thanks for the review!