Not bad

I understand your new to this but this isn't too bad. You got the melodies pretty good. The drums were allright but could've used some work. Try using a normal pattern like this:

Kick: [x][][][x][][][x][][][][x][][][x][][]
Snare: [][][][][x][][][][][][x][][][][][]
Hi Hat: [x][x][x][x][x][x][x][x][x][x][x][x][
x][x][x][x]

(The [] are a note on the redrum and the [x] are where you should put the note)

Just keep practicing diffrent patterns until you find some that sound more hip hopish and that you like.

5/5 - 4.38 / 5.00 (+ 0.045)

Nice

Well, It was pretty good though I felt that there was not enough interesting changes it just sorta stayed with the same thing with little blips here and there through the whole thing. All in all good work, keep it up!