Score: 8
"Decent start..."
date: June 4, 2008
I think the lead stays too slow for too long. Just a thought though.
Also, when you have the intervals, the fifth, sixth, fifth, fourth, I'd suggest maybe trying just the fifth, sixth, fourth, fifth, octave, fifth.
*shrugs* Or something like that. Play around with it.
June 4, 2008
Author's Response:
Hey thanks man appreciate the suggestions, i agree the lead is like horribly horrible and just needs to be changed