Score: 8
"Oh cool"
date: June 3, 2008
The sounds you used sound fine and legit but the composition and architecture of the song need some work.
I'm glad you took up the challenge and made a song though. Heres a few tips to improve the overall listen of the song. When making a song try to think of a high point to your song. Your intro will introduce you to the basic melody but it might not be the whole melody or a completely different one. After the intro you can start a build to the high point of the song when everything comes together. The outro can be whatever you want. It can range from ending abruptly to a slow relief its all up to you.
When you think about all these things placement of drums and introducing new instruments can become easier. Thats just how I view music though. Not all song needs a high and low point. It all depends on the affect your are trying to achieve with the song.
Thanks for the tribute never thought anyone would do something like that before.
