it sounds angry!

XD no really, it does. it's a fitting theme though, and the entire song sounds like it has a meaning. like whatever you were thinking about while you played the guitar was put in the music >_> dunno about the singing, not sure if it fits well, but whatever. sweet work ^^

I don't know what to say....

That was..... different, to say the least. I really can't judge this one, as I normally don't listen to Indie. I'm barely even aware that the category exsists. I didn't really like this song, though. It sounded to harsh to me.
I'd like to see you apply yourself to some general rock and roll, maybe a metal/indie blend.
Again, sorry about not being able to give you a legitiamte review...
This song wasn't bad. I can see where you'd be good at other kinds of music. Experiment, and you might just be the next big thing to hit the Portal. You never know.