Score: 8
"Good stuff."
date: June 1, 2008
Two comments/suggestions:
1. Make it longer. I love the tension you create at the beginning with the dissonances...Maybe keep that going a bit? It's cool.
2. The second brake...Is aggravating to the ear...It's like, "Yes...Yes...Oh. Nevermind. Ok, NOW its going." It's an unnecessary break. The one at...1:20 or so. If it went straight into the fast stuff...Mmm...This would be great.
June 1, 2008
Author's Response:
I see what you mean. I may re-upload this with your suggestions :)