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Its like being at school. seriously, listen to it, it is!

yeah, im a music making n00b, constructive criticism is welcome.

oh yeah, and enjoy!

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Average Score: 8.0 / 10

Score: 6

"Yo yo"

by: Chromatronic

date: June 4, 2008

So yea, the song comes in strong. Im liking the beat. then you bring it down, and add in a new sound. Im waiting for it to come back in with a strong drum beat but it never does. It kinda just trails off after the beggigning. work on adding some more dominant beats to the second half. other that it sounds good. just needs work on structure which can be a bitch.

June 4, 2008

Author's Response:

i agree, it does kind of run out... like a crippled cat that got shot in the leg, it yelps at first, then it walks away and dies....

thanks for the review! ill be sure to keep this in mind

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Score: 7

"A good try"

by: errormsg

date: June 4, 2008

Bad
- it doesn't bring any particular theme or vision to mind,
- needs work on the transitions <--Big one
- seems a little empty, which doesn't go to well with its sound

Good
- unique sound

overall 3-4/5
7/10

June 4, 2008

Author's Response:

thanks for the good review, ill keep this in mind!

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Score: 9

"Very nice!"

by: Zakuzi

date: May 31, 2008

If you are new, then you must be a natural,
thats just pure awsome.
although, it does become a bit repetative.
4/5 9/10

May 31, 2008

Author's Response:

thank you! it is a bit repetitive, but i guess i was a bit lazy, i didnt want to use loops though either.

thanks for the review!

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Score: 10

"totally could see a music video for this"

by: prog17

date: May 31, 2008

if I had any artistic talent at all I would beg to make a music video for this, but I don't so I won't. I agree with your vision here of a person in a school building, that's what I'd make a video of. Really was a nice song. I can't believe you consider yourself a begginer at this, I wish I had that kind of talent in the future.

1st review, 10/10, 5/5. You gotta find someone to use this in a video or something!

May 31, 2008

Author's Response:

wow! thanks a bunch!

this really is the first actual song ive recorded.

funny you should say music video, i would TOTALLY make one.... if i had flash that is, i got the free trial, then somehow got it to last 60 days, ive got 5 days left and im working on a music video at the moment, only problem is, its last week of 8th grade, so im crammed with finals, its IMPOSSIBLE.

thanks for the listen and kind words!