Score: 10
"Great beat, but could use a finishing kick!"
date: May 31, 2008
Great progressive build - nice and fast paced, as well as long but always holding interest. It's a little faster than anything I'd dance to, but that doesn't lessen the quality any!
As a suggestion, the last measure could have used a little spice to add a finishing kick the the song. It would really fit the peppy beat the song maintains, and an exuberant note (kinda like what you did at 1:14 to 1:17, but with a more mirthful sound.) is always great to top off a fast paced dance like this.
Excellent work none the less! I won't dock you for my suggestion; It's a potential addition not a flaw.
May 31, 2008
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review i know what you mean by the kick i shal try and add that in if i make a similiar song ;)