there is yet some substance

It shows a very low amount of effort. But it doesn't need or deserve to be labeled as inept. It's just a no-frill minimalistic song that really doesn't go anywhere. I'm sure you could do much better however.

No strength.

As the other reviewers said, this song doesn't convey any emotion or imagery very well. It simply gives the feeling of slowly waiting.

The beats were on time, and the song is of a substantial length, but I don't know if I could recommend this for anyone, listening pleasure. Sorry.

I'm far from expert, and frankly you can disregard my views if you wish, but I think that the feeling you were hoping to convey would be better realized if the song had a sound start, and then withered into a soft beat like this one, as if something was crushing its spirit. Don't feel discouraged because this song isn't liked! Even the masters have their off days.

not feelin it

i thought this was gonna be one of those songs that was supposed to help people get over it. But, I think u can do better

That low string would sound much better....

at a much higher decibel. and not only on the right. and the name is a little agressive. and doesn't supplie any sort of support for what the song turned out to be. which is sort of a depressed china theme. It depressed me. and im not over it.