Has a nice vibe
I'm not a huge fan of this kind of music, but I kind of enjoy this. It's not melodic enough for me, but you've certainly got an iteresting vibe to it. I guess I would call it "mood music". I do like the quiet piano (?) in the background, and the part at 2:10 where everything kind of faded but synths was cool.
I felt that you could of toned down the percussion and upped the synths, though. Also, the percussion began to get annoying and repetitive. It sounded like you copy and pasted a lot of the beats for most of it. Try to switch things up every so often with percussion. Also, this song would highly benefit from more dynamic contrast. I know it is a pain, but go through and tweak the volume on different phrases of the song. It will help a ton, trust me!
Again, this isn't my kind of music, but you did okay. Keep working at it; I look forward to more of your music! :D
8/10 and 4/5